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允儿超可爱每本火影同人,都要去收服白跟君麻吕,说实在很没意思
太没意思,俩男的有啥好写的,作者怕不是恋童癖,还喜欢男童
咸鲤看了几十章
一般题材好,写的毒我也会给个三星,告诉作者毒在哪,那些说主角弱的,其实可以理解作者,相对主角的能力,在忍界的确太强了,十二个符咒差不多十二种极致的能力,随便一个符咒都能让主角达到吊打百分之八十的人,更何况恶魔,一个圣主就等于火遁最强,以后面具呢?气魔法呢?封印恶魔的能力,好了,我为什么要给一星呢,其实很简单,我真的想不明白在火影世界里,建国有什么用,统治世界?火影这个世界说白了就适合冒险模式,你玩种田经营。忍界实力为尊,变强就好,建国,多此一举
J看的比较混乱!
从第一章就看到80多没有一章不混乱的。任务得来的奖励不清不楚。感觉写哪里就是哪里。剧情没有一个规划。火影里出现的仙侠人物说出来就出来没有提前铺垫也没有解释下。完完全全懵逼状态!!!!!!!!!
食堂泼世界这主角弱了
按这本书的设定来,主角前期就可以在围攻下杀掉一个上忍,并且没有使用写轮眼,可是在打再不斩时,三勾玉开了,圣主那“堪称尾兽”的查克拉也开了,结果躲过了几个手里剑,就大口喘着粗气,主角打架没有战术,再不斩用雾隐之术,主角跟个憨憨一样硬钢,再不斩用几个水分身就把主角耍的团团转,作者是不是火影都没看过?
星辞主角这个人刻画的太失败了
没实力还装逼 ,遇到强的敌人就苦笑 ,一点意识都没有,遇到个人就爆种 ,被简介骗过来的 ,真不知道为什么有这么多打五星的人 ,这么多拖,看看书评里面的人评价怎么样就知道他们都是托。
零零八中后期全蹦了
中后期全蹦了,能写到500多章真是奇迹,剧情全乱了,为了扭转到原剧情线上,生生把这本书写死了,这么多外挂,开局就有了堪比10尾的圣魔,不死,复活,治疗,可到了后期还写的这么弱,简直是个奇迹,太垃圾了
神奇的天使真不错
几乎每一句话都有评论呢,太多了,实在太多了!!!!
神奇的天使真是弱
主要是主角太弱了,太菜了。
少安毋躁
作者文笔不行,主角太垃圾,有符咒,有跟尾兽一样的恶魔圣主,这么多bug在,碰到谁都打半天,有不死之身都不敢拼,有能控制的尾兽圣主还动不动就累晕,呵呵。废物的见多了,就没见过这么废的。虽然我才看十几章,但也能说明毒点多到什么程度
孤独的雨
抱歉,看到47章,从书架中删除
忘不却的记忆一一一一一一一一一一一一一一一
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limit写的一般
作者对人物的刻画不够好,一个人在那种世界中呆了好几年,而支撑他活下来的是女主,那男主一定会对女主产生偏执般的感情,被绑架的地方写的也不怎么地,作者这个地方写得和那些小白文龙傲天一样扮猪吃老虎,和原本想描述的形象截然不同。8.3分高了,应该7.3分差不多
第十章就送走我了,这女的都算是偷窥别人隐私了,属于犯法操作,居然因为是女的就无所谓了
千若璃
前边很有意思,后面无聊。后面就已经开始玄幻了。也是,现在这些恐怖悬疑被管的太严了。前面是真的挺有意思的,140多章往后就很无聊了。就看看前面还行。
我头像我老婆书写的还行吧
这本书怎么评价呢?不差也不好,比如同化哪章真是难受,前脚两年说猪脚很冷陌,后面就一直各种亲人我记得如果有幸福的话,猪脚一开始就应该被自己否定无序了还有污染把自己分裂,分裂出了的应该一样被污染了,无论何种情况,分裂出来的人格都会变成诡异
北已梦
看了十章直接弃书,看着看着就跳章节一样,逻辑接不上,
大白白扑棱蛾子没扛住
我倒在了第十三章。没点毒抗不建议点开
蔡徐坤n2
章节衔接不上
我鸽德今天也要摸鱼海星
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